Hands-on learning

Mint, mulch, raspberry. 
Electric sting, the bee’s wings
buzzing. Bare feet follow
hot tar squiggles into the creek,
bloated with spring melt. Water-
melon, as much
as our mouths could hold. Four hands
wrapped around a garden hose. Soft
sienna hair draped like a wedding
veil. A neural pathway taking shape
slow as a sunburn, warped
inside my body, exclamation point
cramped into a question mark.
Butterflies. Cool breeze at sunset.
The dinner whistle. Tomorrow,
tomorrow. Slipping
flip flops back on and walking home.

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  1. krstaten Avatar

    This was full of so much good sensory stuff, I absolutely love it ❀

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    1. elizabethburnam Avatar

      Thank you so much!!

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  2. LuAnne Holder Avatar

    As a former educator, I think you have this description right on. (Although you evidently have a strong linguistic intelligence as well.)

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    1. elizabethburnam Avatar

      Thank you so much LuAnne! πŸ˜πŸ™

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