The desert after rain

I don't smell it so much as feel it in my noseโ€”a sharpness like the early stages of a sneeze, but a welcome one, catharsis. Dust congeals into a thick red clay. You say you want to throw yourself away. Start fresh. Grow stronger roots this time, somewhere the rain over-loves the land until the land is evergreen. I say, look how the pink quartz and the sunlight dance. Listen. When Spring is born, she sings a melodyโ€”the same song here as anywhere, a song that makes the moon blush. Yet still we run, deaf to all but our own unanchored heartbeat. They say the mountain was a woman, hardened by grief. Her name was Sandia, watermelon. Look. See this great rift of granite and limestone, and tell me you can't taste the fruit encased beneath.

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  1. walter commonwood Avatar

    OMG you’re talented….that one moved me a lot……

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  2. Amanda Dzimianski Avatar

    Absolutely gorgeous.

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    1. elizabethburnam Avatar

      thank you!!

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  3. SelmaMartin Avatar

    MMmn, *nods* I love what this did to me. *nods again* and these words: “somewhere the rain over-loves the land until the land is evergreen* So so lovely. Thanks for sharing. Keep going. xo

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    1. elizabethburnam Avatar

      Thank you so much!!

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      1. SelmaMartin Avatar

        A pleasure.

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